A rough weekend was not the best catalyst for thoughtful revisions on my comic. That being said, I do think a few things could use some definite tweaking.
I want to go through and add a little more development about the link between my arm coloring and future interest in tattoos. It seemed like people wanted a bit more closure there and I think at this point, it's left a little too open-ended. Perhaps I'll use my final panel for some key important details instead of the blocky THE END which was, admittedly, a cop out.
Other than that, I was thinking of shortening the gap between the left and right panels on each page. Personally, I just think they're a little too far apart. Certainly not enough to form an immediate disconnect but, I want to make the message clear to any reader. I don't want something to happen like our discussion of Daniel's comic.
I'm hoping my group members will have more to say on this in class!
-Jeff
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